Need some Usability Feedback

Hello Everyone!

I’m working on a project and could really use your input. The client is seeking usability feedback - how the site feels and functions from a user’s perspective. We’re also open to any feedback you might have, whether it’s positive, negative, or neutral. As long as it’s constructive, we’d love to hear it!

Please note that the site is still in development, so some images are missing, and we haven’t implemented device variants yet. However, it does showcase several features of Sparkle, such as embedded digital publications, a client-managed blog page (using a third-party script), and a scrolling website animation in the header of the web design page. Additionally, all contact forms and Free Gift links utilize Sparkle Pop-ups.

Looking forward to your thoughts—thanks in advance for your time and feedback!

Hello Frank,

The question is: “how the site feels and functions from a user’s perspective”.

Who is the user in this case? What is a target group? I presume the people from marketing department. Thus, I tried to imagine a marketing person participating in a focus group to evaluate the site of Impact&Ink. As such, I will try to answer the question of whether I would hire I&I to design my company’s site and other marketing materials.

The first aesthetic impression is positive, clean, and contrasting (but balanced) colours, nice people, and a general enthusiastic atmosphere, which is also created by headings. Next, I started reading body texts, and this made me wonder: why do they tell me the same thing about what is on any of those types of sites and what is in every marketing textbook. I know all this stuff. I know what our company site should look like, I know our target market, and I do not expect them to tell me all this. I do not have the resources to design our site myself, and I need to hire somebody to do it to my taste. It should be like going to the tailor when I exactly know what my suit should be like.

Meanwhile, I&I declare: “We start by understanding your brand, goals, and target audience to create a design strategy that works for you.” But our business is very complex, and we are not going to wait; nobody knows for how long until they reach their understanding (of course, with our help, what will cost my time). And, btw, do they also offer in-depth analysis of a company? Is I&I a market analyst as well?
I&I promises “your content to not only look good but also make a lasting impact”. But with what measures? Commercials (TV/newspapers/internet) usually undergo validation procedures. What about internet sites?

Marketing professionals are primarily concerned with profit, however, in order to calculate it, it is necessary to account for expenses. There is nothing about the costs on the I&I site. I would expect to be given at least some overall information. I need this while presenting I&I as a prospective contractor to my boss.

What would I expect to find on a site of this type?

Foremost, a solid self-presentation. What can I say about I&I looking at this site? Unfortunately, nothing very encouraging. They wrap standard elements (happy people photos and textbook info) up in nice colours and graphics, attracting attention. However, I believe this graphic is not vividly associated with the type of business they do. In other words, the design of this web page is adaptable to various other brands.

Next is also a part of self-presentation: what size and kind of business they are ready to offer service to.

I would also expect to see the idea of site creation workflow they offer. What should I, as a client, have to arrange to get things going? What materials? Photos? Texts? etc. How long does it usually take to design a site? What is the cost (just some orientation, cost per hour etc.)? I am not going to even consider buying a pig in a poke.

It would be informative to see a site created by I&I for a client. It could be a real one or a fictional, but it should contain an explanation of the creation process. What was the starting point? What were the client’s expectations? Why was that type of graphics used? And many other points would inform what is awaiting me.

I could go into other details, but let me finish at this point with my humble remarks.

@zbr Thank you so much for taking the time to provide such detailed and thoughtful feedback on the Impact & Ink website. Your insights are incredibly valuable, and I truly appreciate the effort you’ve put into evaluating the site.

Both the and I understand that the site might seem to follow certain conventions commonly found in the industry, and we want to clarify a few points to provide a better understanding of our client’s approach.

Target Audience and Site Structure:

The website is designed as a series of landing pages, each tailored to specific campaigns that the client runs across social media and Google AdWords. These landing pages are not collectively intended to serve as a traditional website that users stumble upon; rather, they are focused on addressing specific needs and queries that the targeted audience - mainly independent business owners, and decision-makers - might have when they reach the site through these campaigns.

User Experience Focus:

Given the nature of these landing pages, the primary objective is to ensure that when a user arrives on the site, they can quickly and easily find the information they need, presented in a way that is both visually appealing, reassuring and functionally efficient. We aim to meet their expectations by providing clear, concise, and direct information that allows them to understand our client’s services and get in touch with them without any friction.

Custom Solutions and Process Transparency:

I completely understand your concerns about wanting a clear understanding of the design process, timeline, and cost. The website’s current focus is to highlight our client’s ability to create fully customised solutions, as every client and project is unique. While we’ve aimed to convey this through the messaging, we’ll be further addressing these aspects more thoroughly in the blog section.

Future Content in the Blog:

In the blog, our client will be detailing case studies that not only showcase their portfolio but also provide real-life examples of their work, including the specific steps taken to meet their clients’ needs. These case studies will cover the scope of services offered, the creative process behind each project, and crucially, budget information to help prospective clients understand potential costs.

Each blog post will serve as a future landing page for marketing campaigns, offering in-depth content that speaks directly to the needs of specific audiences. This approach will ensure that the site remains dynamic and responsive to the evolving demands of the audience.

Once again, thank you for your feedback. It’s through insights like yours that we can continue to refine our offerings and better serve our clients. I’ll be sure to share your observations with our client. If you have any further thoughts or suggestions, I’d love to hear them.

A great job in the making Frank! :slight_smile:

In givng you this feedback I have tried to place myself in the shoes of a potential User. I’m also taking in the psychology of what I am seeing and feeling…

The big one that stands out on my first look of the website is the hero image! Either heavily over photoshopped or an AI image. Straightaway this feels fake to me and the feelings of I think this design company takes shortcuts?.. Will I be dealing with “real people”?

On the hero topic, please check your main navigation across your sites pages… it is “sand dune shifting”.

I’m taking to the colour scheme (funky) and with the images presented I feel this website is geared to people in their earlier 20’s… but I’m thinking this is probably not the targeted audience? I feel if this site is geared towards more the mature business owner then I would leave the site and go elsewhere. If this site is geared for the mature business owner then the imagery for me feels wrong.

For me the layout feels very rectangular (squashed on top of one another) and with no space to breath. This might be what is being aimed for? It alludes to me a very restrictive non-organic approach to how this design company goes about things.

The content is well written but also in a matter-of-fact-style. It lets me know my “stuck points” but doesn’t allude or show/state what I will have going through the experience with Impact&Ink? Where do I see myself once Impact&Ink has helped me with their expertise?

The website page could do with real live examples for me to see Impact&Ink’s website building skills out in the wild. To me this page feels generic with the imagery used, and please… The scaling of the mobile version of the desktop website isn’t correct. It looks more like the desktop but on mobile, but then you did say the mobile device hasn’t been done yet… but please don’t forget! :crossed_fingers:

Sorry to say, for me the blog page is a total disconnect with all the fine work that has gone into the website. It once again feels something is not right here. It feels it has been shoe-horned into place alluding to me again corners have been cut. The paragraph text in the blog post is way too small. The GET IN TOUCH button on the blog page doesn’t trigger the Contact Us Popup.

I followed most of the social media links and it might be a really good idea to start uploading more visuals to get the ball rolling on that side of the fence. I understand the reason why at this stage, but the real User won’t.

Ok, I’d best stop it at that, and apologies Frank if this comes across too stark. Just trying to give honest feedback and at times it can come across confronting. So no voodoo on me please! :slight_smile: :pray:

Good luck with it all! :slight_smile:

@FlaminFig Thanks for your detailed feedback!

Constructive criticism is always valuable, and I appreciate you taking the time to share your thoughts. To give you some context, the parent company of Impact and Ink conducted extensive A/B testing a while back, and this current design was overwhelmingly favored by the target demographic. The design team, though young, is incredibly talented - they’ve designed numerous websites for our clients. Their target audience is also within a similar age range. However, this is their first time working with Sparkle.

In the past, we’ve successfully recreated their innovative designs using Sparkle, which I think has opened their eyes to its potential. I’m hoping they’ll see the benefit of using Sparkle directly, allowing them to design websites without relying on third-party developers to bring their ideas to life.

What I’m aiming to do here is take the testing to a segmented level by getting feedback from people outside of their usual target demographic. The goal is to strike a balance that appeals to a broader market, beyond just their primary focus. Your feedback will be invaluable in helping us identify features or messaging that could expand their market appeal.

So, we definitely welcome constructive criticism - it’s all part of the process, and I’m very grateful for the feedback so far. Just a quick note: the blog page you mentioned hasn’t had its stylesheet created yet, but it’s in the pipeline, along with the mobile and tablet variants of the site.

Thanks again for your insights!

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